Sunday Nights
Oh, I feel like a horrible person (I know I am one).
**I keep promising to come back and reply and post again and then I don’t. Therefore, my current solution will be to simply appear again without any promises, since I seem to be having such a damn problem with commitment, lol.
Goodness, but it’s good to be back again
And only now that I’ve browsed around all of your sites again have I realized how I truly missed you (and your very good poetry, in particular).
Here’s some writing… (yeah, finally, lol)**
Sunday Nights
Restless lethargy glitters with the dust speckles
strung onto the washing lines of lightrays
spun across the room.
Past once-white curtains and sprinkler-stained glass
troops of trees and roofs loom against the emptied sun
-like strangers
against streetlights -
as the battered cauldron pours its contents onto the horizon.
The street lies sprawled among the houses,
tucked up in the fuzzy cotton that blankets those
sleepy, prickly towns scattered through the country-side.
The house dozes like a white-haired organ player,
filling crosswords in the last few sunlight pools
pondering a nine-letter word synonymous for some French dessert
while the brick-blocks remain empty as the week to come.

excited to see your comments
:)
& was excited to see my rss feed to your blog to bold when i hit “refresh all” when i turned my puter on this morning
i will update you on me via an email later tonight
i’ve been well & i’m dieing to know where you were all this time lol -nice to see that you havent lost your writing touch xo
p.s the lights photo, i used a “star8″ filter on my lens when shooting that photo, giving any & all lights the star look
it’s pretty neat
chloe said this on September 6, 2009 at 7:02 am
Magical. This was definitely worth waiting for
I particularly loved the first and last stanzas.
“pondering a nine-letter word synonymous for some French dessert” lol
Jan Freeman said this on September 6, 2009 at 9:43 am
Here is a weird interp for you. It’s like leaving the relief pitcher after it closes as the highlands. Then pestering a once tormented soul who now is just plain pissed.
The hunington man is crazy enough to post the names of those he plans to shoot down
me said this on September 6, 2009 at 10:23 am
it’s been forever since your last post
tunefulwords said this on September 8, 2009 at 10:55 am
Jan: lol, Thank you. I think my favourite here would be the second, where the sun is a empty, battered cauldron *grins*
tunefulwords: Yup, I know. I am updating more regularly again, now
me: Um, I’m not entirely sure what the cryptic comment means; some enlightenment would be greatly appreciated?
cravingoxygen said this on September 8, 2009 at 8:35 pm
Great imagery. For some reason it reminds me of a nostalgic summer memory.
socratesoul said this on January 20, 2010 at 5:26 am